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A Response to “A Modest Proposal” on Dar Kush

One of the most blogs that I follow consistently is Dar Kush. Steve Barnes is a damn fine sci-fi writer (If my Space Inc. TV series ever gets off the ground, I’ll champion him for the writing staff) and while we differ in a lot of our conclusions, he is smart and articulate and that all adds up to a place I can go that challenges my ideas and gives me an alternative perspective from a voice I like and respect.

One of the side effects is that on occasion I leave long and meandering rants comments on his site. Since I am trying to populate this website with all things Clint, I figured that I would cross post the comments here as well.

If you want to see the full context, you will want to read “A Modest Proposal” but I think that the embedded quotes give this passing context.

"Follow the money…or show me another motivation as strong…or show me why environmentalists are more corruptible than corporatists."

It isn’t just money that can corrupt a person. Our self image is a powerful force and if our sense of self worth comes from what we do… then there is nothing bigger than saving the world. There is an awfully big stumbling block if the world doesn’t actually need saving.

From what I can see, the global temperatures have been climbing slowly and fitfully ever since the last ice age. There may well be an anthropogenic modifier to that over the last couple hundred years – and if there is, that may be a bad thing. One or both of those may also be incorrect. What I think does have a high probability is that some significant number of those AGW evangelists have surely tied their own sense of value to AGW being true and that it will result in unmitigated disaster. They have dedicated their life to this cause and would find it very painful to even contemplate that we may not be a significant climate modifier, or if we are, that the modifications will have a net benefit to life on this planet. Amongst the scientists this psychological drive to make a difference in the world may well outweigh the financial incentive by a solid margin. Amongst the activists I would guess that it is almost the entire driving force.

"The worst case scenario for limiting population to two children per couple is some disappointed people, and a growth of government (bad)."

Actually, I think that the worst case scenario for state mandated limits to child bearing involves negative eugenics on a massive scale. We don’t yet have the ability to manipulate DNA to custom build a child for anyone, but we do have relatively inexpensive DNA testing; so while the doctors can’t guarantee to create a "perfect" baby, they can find out if there is any traits in a child that the parent(s) might find undesirable. What do you think would happen if they offered a reasonably good marker for… say the three to five percent of the population that is gay? Or short? Or predisposed to obesity?

A solid economic system that gives a high standard of living to the majority of the population seems to be the best way to get a population to voluntarily limit the number of children they have to below the replacement level. A lower mortality rate also tracks with lower birth rate so that may be a utilitarian argument for socialized medicine in developing countries. That socio-economic system most amenable to all this seems to be capitalism moderated by a democratic government… but we have to limit the government so that it doesn’t follow its natural tendency to degenerate into a system of selling favour to big business and running up a massive deficit in a race to buy votes.

"1) Increase the world-wide education and freedom of women. A core means of population control.

2) Shifting to sustainable energies as opposed to petroleum, which keeps us vulnerable to Mid-east politics, and confuses our reasons to involve ourselves in wars in that region. There are probably very good reasons to have invaded Iraq. But no one can argue that many of the people making those decisions also had financial interests, direct or indirect, in the oil industry. Wouldn’t it have been nice to have greater clarity, without the potential corruption of mega-bucks?

3) Investment in various energy-saving technologies. Clearly a growth industry world-wide. Why shouldn’t America get ahead of this? "

Hey, I’m all for #1 up there. As a libertarian, I abhor the fact that half the world population is treated as second class citizens. As a pragmatist I find it ludicrous that half the intellectual capital of the planet it being suppressed.

Now things get a little more complicated when we get to #2. Yes, buying oil from the Middle East does keep us vulnerable and confuses us. Oil is also the least expensive means to store and transport energy that we have yet to find – by a wide margin. It is also about the only source of money for people in those regions. Any other source of energy would mean more expensive… well… everything. We are still heading into the Great Depression 2.0, do you really think we can afford that? And while the standard of living for many in the Middle East is not high compared to ours – what effect to you think it would have if we managed to cut off almost the entirety of their income? That would be a pretty serious downside to several hundred million people.

I say we curtail our interference in the Middle East as much as possible, even though many there would see the pursuit of the above #1 as a gross interference. We let the price of oil move as the market demands; due to increasing expense of extraction, it would eventually rise to the point where other energy storage mediums become cost effective.

Here is where I come down on the #3 above – There would be no need for government regulation on price – with one faction fighting to regulate it higher while another fights to keep it down… both thinking themselves on the side of the angels and both not having a clue as to what effect it will actually have on the poor or the rich. There would also be no need for the government to pick technological winners (their record in that arena being rather abysmal) since the market incentives will eventually draw a myriad of industry backed technological ventures out of the labs.

"Why shouldn’t America get ahead of this?" Because in the thirty years that it will take for oil to lose its crown as the most effective energy storage system, the government will spend hundreds of billions of dollars dragging technologies out of the lab before they are actually needed or cost effective.

When you are talking about something as complex as the Terrestrial system, there is very little that is clear or simple.

Inking and Colouring Sam Shelford.

I bought a program called Manga Studio EX 4 that is designed to create and lay out comic books. I don’t work at it enough to be good but I think with practice I could do a yeoman’s serviceable job – good enough to get my ideas and stories across.

One of the first projects I did with it was a drawing of my nephew Sam – he’s the one who created the little stop motion animation two years ago when he was five (see here). He wanted a picture of himself with the Pookie Bear I gave him (from back when Garfield was cool… I also had an Odie from the same twenty years ago). I inked it in Manga Studio and then took it into Photoshop to give it a quick cell shaded finish.

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The thing about creating a graphic novel is that if you can draw adequately, there is no barrier but time to creating content.

I think the first project will be from the Red Hellas world that I am creating… a sort of sword, sorcery & post-singularity thing I’m working on.

Sam Creates Another Adventure for One Little Egg

I was working on a script (a short to shoot with Red #351) when my nephew Sam came into the room wanting us to create another stop motion movie. I told him that it would have to wait ’til later in the day but he has all the patience of a five year old… which isn’t unusual once his age is taken into consideration. He went and borrowed his dad’s Canon Rebel and started taking pictures. I noticed he was taking the first few hand held and I explained to him how the camera had to stay exactly in one place and so we set the camera up on the tripod and then I went back to work on the computer.

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About an hour later he came into my room with the camera and asked me to make it a movie. Faced with that enthusiasm, I couldn’t rightly plead work and so I conceded to the movie maker.
He had taken 131 pictures. I dropped them into Photoshop where I batch resized them down to 720×480. I opened Premiere Pro, created a new project, imported the images and then dropped them all onto the timeline. I rendered the sequence out and opened it in Sonic Fire Pro where I played several of the scores for Sam while he watched the video. Once he picked the score he wanted, I saved that out and dropped it on the timeline under the video. We then jumped into the titler where he picked the title and the font. I dropped them on the timeline above the footage and he had me move the title sequence out ahead of most of the images so it had a black background for most of it.
He had taken every picture by himself and I used them all in the sequence he had taken them, he scored it and titled it… I was just the guy following orders. Even the first few frames he took handheld worked out for the bouncy beginning sequence.
I rendered it out and he used the Xbox360 to premiere it on the 48" television for his mom, dad, grandma, grandpa and brother.
Sam’s response? It was the automatic response for a child of 2007… "That’s perfect… now put it on YouTube."

Of course Youtube butchers the video quality, not so much compressing it as crushing it from 2,647 KB Windows Media Video file down to a 715 KB Flash Video… Google will have to improve that before Youtube is a viable delivery platform for content that anyone gives a damn about.

RED #351

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For a while, I had been looking at getting a Panasonic AG-HVX200. While it has some resolution issues I was enamored of the P2 storage and the variable frame rate not to mention that the codec they are using is far superior to that used in HDV cameras.
I was counting my pennies and looking at accessories.
Then earlier this year Jim Jannard, the guy who founded Oakley, started talking about building a new camera company. The Red Digital Cinema Company was going to build the best digital cinema camera that technology would allow. It was going to have a 12 megapixel sensor to capture a phenomenal 2540p with variable frame rates up to sixty frames per second. That sensor would be the same size as a Super35mm frame and so would be able to use cine lenses to get a nice shallow depth of field.
I thought that would be a pretty sweet camera to rent for when I get to the big show. The few cameras with specifications that got even close to that were renting for $9,000 for the minimum three day rental and weren’t for sale… but if they were it would probably be for well over $100,000. The Sony CineAlta HDW950 can only capture at 1920×1080 and it is way on the other side of $100,000 when it is ready to use.
I figured that Red would try and sell the Red One for under a $100,000 but that it would still be way out of my price range. I went back to looking at the Panasonic.
Then Jim said he would sell the Red One body for $17,500!
Okay, that is all well and good but a cine lens can easily cost tens of thousands of dollars so it is still out off… what’s that, they will make adaptors to use the relatively inexpensive lenses in the 35mm still camera line from Canon and Nikon? And Red will make their own line of cine lenses that will be far lower priced than the Cooke or Zeiss Ultra Prime cine lenses?
With formatting options unmatched, they would also allow you to window down on the sensor and only use the center so that you can use 16mm lenses and get 2k footage, 1080p HD or 720p HD… from 1 frame per second on up to 120 frames per second.
Yeah, yeah, yeah. I got the vibe that Jannard and the rest of the Red team were earnest and genuine in what they wanted to do but they were talking about coming in to a new field and doing something that the established players insist is years away yet… and that more than one film snob is saying couldn’t be done.
And then Mike Curtis, a guy who writes it as he sees it, had a chance to see some of the footage off of the very first working sensor and he was very impressed. So impressed that at least one of the other camera companies he works with took exception to the laudatory nature of his post.
With them showing footage at IBC 2006, this really seems to show that they are on target and that it just might come about.
The upshot of it is that I now have a rather spiffy hunk of milled titanium sitting on my desk signifying that I’ve put $1000 in Jim Jannard’s hands and am now standing 351st in line to get a Red One digital cinema camera. As well, I’ve sent in the form to lay $750 dollars towards a $9,500 18-85mm f2.8 cine lens. If you add in the cost of storage which would be $2000 to start off with… and then there is a follow focus and matte box… and a rail system to support it… were looking at somewhere just on the up side of $30,000 US to get it ready to go. Sure that is more than close to three times as expensive as a similarly kitted Panasonic AG-HVX200 but seeing as how it is an order of magnitude better I’m going to see if my budget can stretch to it.

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SWE4: Leaving Los Angeles

Well, the Screenwriting Expo 4 trip is over and I’m on my way home. I figured that I would throw up a mini travel photo-blog so here goes.

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First off, I was surprised by how few people there were on the beaches. It was a nice sunny day and the beaches didn’t have a whole lot of people doing the sun and surf thing.

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Flying over northern California, there were a lot of fires in the mountains and it made for some photogenic landscapes what with the setting sun and all.

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We flew right next to Mount Saint Hellens and it was doing a little steaming so that had me snapping a few images.

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I’d have liked to have had my digital SLR for this so that I could have gotten better quality images but the old Canon D30 is a bear to haul around if the point of the trip isn’t photography… which is why I bought this little Pentax in the first place. It’s a brand new model with six megapixels but it doesn’t produce anywhere near as nice an image as my five year old D30 with its three megapixels. But that is the focus of another article that I’m working on so I’ll just go back to the pictures I did get… which are always better than the pictures I didn’t get.
The sun was just about perfect as we started dropping in on Vancouver and it made for some sweet cityscapes.

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Vancouver-Sunset

Another plane ride up to Prince George and then another three hours of driving get me back home where the next morning greeted me with a blanket of snow… it looks a little different from yesterday morning in LA.

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SWE4: PitchXchange Final Tally

Eight pitches.
I missed one and two executives missed theirs. One of the executives didn’t bother trying to make it up while the other is letting us email a pitch to him.
Of the people I pitched to, one gave a pass with good feedback and encouragement, two asked for treatments, one asked for a synopsis and another asked for the completed script when it is ready.
I’m thinking either that is a pretty fair showing… or that the people at these pitches are free with their interest. It might just be easier to say no in a letter rather than face to face.
Either way, I have some writing to do.

SWE4: PitchXchange – For Lack of a Treatment – C. from a Management Co.

Since I came here planning to use the pitch process to focus my writing, I didn’t have a lot of material ready to hand out. I have two television series and two features that I can’t decide between for my next project and I thought this would be a great way to focus myself.
Pitch all four at the wall and see what sticks.
The point is that C. was impressed with the idea for my boxing/organized crime series and wanted to see a treatment… but I don’t have a treatment with me.
He was not so impressed with that.
So the moral of the story is to always have at least a treatment to give them. I’m beginning to see that a solid treatment is the lowest level of preparedness that you should come to these with. And for a series, you might want to have one paragraph breakdowns for the first five episodes after the pilot.
He took my email address and said that he might be it touch with me. Heavy on the might.
I ain’t saying that for the lack of a treatment, a sale was lost… but it was a mark against me here.

SWE4: PitchXchange – S. From a Production Company

So I pitch my boxing club/organized crime script to her and she points out that her company prides themselves in specializing in non-violent content.
Box and organized crime.
Non-violent? Not so much, what with the fighting and the killing.
I had done fairly deep research into the companies but it was found wanting here. There wasn’t anything about it on their Expo form and Google hadn’t turned anything up. Well, the best intentions don’t mean that you’ll get it right every time so the best thing to do is to smile and apologize for not doing a better job of researching what they would be interested in.
She was good about it and joked that maybe if it was Kabala boxing… and then she says that she would still like me to send her a treatment, character bios and a breakdown of the first five episodes.
Either I’m better at this than I thought or she is feeling really sorry for me. Either way I’ll chalk it up in the win column… and against what should have been a tough sell.

SWE4: How to Sell Your TV Show – Marc and Elaine Zicree

This is the second session from the Zicrees and I am learning a fair bit from them. The first is here – but to recap, he has written over a hundred episodes of television, was a producer on Sliders… the man has been there, done that. They have a website called supermentors.com
Right off the bat, there are some ideas that would, deliver a value to people reading this site and help me make contacts in the industry while also building some recognition for brand Clint-Johnson. Foremost amongst those is conducting interviews for this website which would give me content other than my own drivel.
That ain’t to say that my own pearls of ignorance aren’t worthy readin’… just that the more worthwhile content there is on this site the better. I’d learn from this and hopefully it would be valuable to you the gentle reader as well. It should have that whole win-win thing goin’ for it.
Anyway, the Zicrees tell us that while it isn’t expected that a spec pilot will actually get made, it isn’t unheard of (wohoo!). While it is generally accepted that a spec pilot is a writing sample only, both Malcolm in the Middle and Veronica Mars were spec pilots – and he feels that the climate right now is better than it ever has been for original scripts and spec pilots.
Don’t get a spec pilot confused with spec episode; with a spec pilot you are creating something from scratch that will show your distinctive voice – the spec episode is written for an existing series and you are trying to show that you can write in a style that will fit in with someone else’s show.
Marc says that there are two kinds of series “bibles” – the pitching bible and the working bible. The pitching bible is what you use to get the show sold and the working bible is what you use to get new writers up to speed and keep track of show continuity.
The pitching bible should consist of ten to twelve pages of highlights and plot points that will catch the interest of a producer. The key things to note are; who is the audience and who are the characters? He felt that this should be what you are working your pitch off of and probably not something you would leave behind. He feels strongly that if you leave too much material behind, the executive you pitched to is not in turn pitching the show to their boss. They might not have the enthusiasm that they would otherwise bring. Plus, they know what their boss is looking for and what interests them, so they would know better how to slant the pitch to the final arbiter of the greenlight.
He then went into what sort of compensation you should be looking at as a writer for television. If I could afford it, I would actually pay to write for television. Not that I would turn down a paycheck – capitalist pig-dog remember? But I will go over his numbers here for those who would find them interesting.
A newly minted staff writer can look to start at about $200,000 a year while a story editor will start at $300,000. You progress through co-producer to producer to co-executive producer on up to executive producer/showrunner. By the time you make executive producer you can expect to be making about $1 million a year. Writing credit for an episodes will get you more money on top of that yearly salary with a pilot episode going for $60,000 to $100,000.
It is no surprise that there are people who get into the business just for the money… and I think we’ve all seen the shows that this results in.
What I would find more interesting than money is that once you hit the producer level, you can pitch series ideas to studios and networks… and be taken seriously. Looking at what I did on the Ragnarok pilot, I suppose that I can legitimately call myself an executive producer… the problem would be to get any “other” producer to take that seriously.
He also broke down the season for us so that we would know when most of the pitching, developing and pilot production periods fall.
March through early June is when the production companies are listening to pitches and it is June through September when they are in turn pitching those ideas to the networks. The networks deliberate over September and October and then give the go ahead to write pilots scripts through October and November. They look over the scripts in December and then in January they go into production on the pilots for those they like. They evaluate the pilots over the spring and this gives them a couple months to deliberate before the network upfronts where they tell the advertising world what will be in the fall schedule.
And then the cycle starts over again.
He didn’t talk about it but the pilot season is starting to diffuse out through the year with a spring or summer start for some shows in addition to the traditional fall and mid-season starts. I think that this will cause the whole thing to spread out over the year so that shows are pitched, piloted and picked up at any time throughout the year. But that’s just me so take it with a block of salt.
He feels that just up and calling the production companies isn’t a problem. Call and talk to the assistant – but keep in mind that they are usually very busy people and so don’t try and have a long chat with them. Courteously ask the question and then politely thank them for the answer you get.
My take is that you focus your question and be specific – “What is Mr. Producer looking for right now?” “Does she have a Sky Marshal drama in development?.. Would she be interested in one I’ve been developing?” Don’t bombard them with questions – sweet and short are the watchwords.
He feels that you should maximize the genre crossover right now… “Cross a cop show with a family drama.”
If you want to align yourself with an executive producer, keep track of the shows that are being canceled (or not picked up) and try to get hold of those people who produced the ones that mesh best with what you are trying to do. They often don’t have another project ready to go and are willing to jump into another if it looks like a solid bet. The Hollywood Creative Directory and IMDBpro give full credits for shows. He didn’t feel that agents or managers were necessary… but that they helped a lot.
He talked more about the series that he is trying to get made picked up- Magic Time. He originally created it as a series and only when it didn’t get picked up did he novelize it. It did well as a three novel series and was turned into a successful audio book as well. This success in turn allowed him to take it back to television where it had a much warmer reception as something that had been a moderate hit in another medium.
I’ve been wanting to tackle Ragnarok as a graphic novel and this might be the way to go. I could rough out one myself just to see how much work it is.
Even for other projects, producing a graphic novel would certainly be less expensive than a full pilot episode and might generate some income where a declined pilot will usually return zero on your investment. While I do dabble in the art side of things, I am too slow and I’d have to do more than dabble to make sure that my artwork is pretty enough –

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- so I’d have to find a real artist to render up the pictures. Even so, a graphic novel is a hell of a lot less time, money and work than it is for a full live action pilot.
If you are going to produce your own pilot or series, he was emphatic that you never stop asking for investors. Everyone and anyone you talk to is asked “Do you want to invest in a film? Do you know anyone who might be interested?” He has a standard finders fee of 5% for anyone who brings in an investor and that probably helps a lot. I think that would make me a little more comfortable with hitting people up for leads. I wouldn’t be asking for handouts, I’d be offering to pay for what they can do for me. I’ll have to keep that in mind for my next full length film or television project.
The “pattern budget” is the cost of the average episode with most of the big US networks running about $2 million and seeing anything under $1 million or over $3 million as dicey.
They feel that a rounded career is important and that you should have a few projects in development… I think I take that concept to its illogical conclusion.

SWE4: PitchXchange – For the Lack of a Synopsis – D. at a Production Company

Well, I pitched my second series idea to D. at a newish production company. This series is a really near term, hard science fiction series set around the first steps to colonize space.
He was intrigued and wanted to read a synopsis.
You might want to re-read the last entry with ‘synopsis’ replacing ‘treatment’… I’d probably still go with a treatment since I’m sure that he would have accepted that in substitute for a synopsis.
At least he asked me to email it to him rather than taking my address with a “don’t email me, I’ll email you”.
D. had a lot of good questions and just five minutes of back and forth with him helped me settle some questions and had me chucking out ideas that I had liked. He helped focus the core of the series and  tweaked a couple of new ideas for me. I think that the show will be the better for it.
So this series has gotten some interest as well as the other one. This isn’t helping me focus at all.